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Reviews For: Scarlet Satin

M.D.Irvine
2006-04-07
ch 1,
i like it esp. the beginning but somehow it seems to be hanging, i guess i expected it to be longer. i also thot seeing double was amazing but i left a different review for it.id love if u could R&R my fics.
Wylderaven
2006-02-16
ch 1,
I really like this. Beautiful description - I would like to see if this could go further - but this is from someone who can't seem to end her own stories - so maybe best to ignore that...despite that - I like this. I'll read more of your posts once I'm not so near to sleep.
Darkest Dream
2006-01-08
ch 1,
well said, amazing story.
a24HourSmile
2005-08-04
ch 1,
Wow.

This.

Is.

Great.

I did a report on dowry deaths once. Yeah. This story reminds me of that.

But I love it. Short. Simple. Powerful.

I
EoSpHoRuS
2005-07-21
ch 1,
Red? Come on. What happend to good old fashioned white?! White... and how freakin young is she?! Poor thing...

~Meg
Chronic.Vertigo
2005-07-15
ch 1,
Oh...very angsty...lol. I like it ^_^. Short, sweet, and to the point.
aitvaras
2004-09-18
ch 1,
Ooh, I've read this before. =D I'm just reviewing here so I can add you to my Author Alert list. xD (This is Grace, by the way! Haha, I stalk you everywhere!)
Asmodeus Sanity
2004-02-10
ch 1,
i love the vivid descripotiions. very sad, yet realistic. love the angst. good job, you should post more.
K.G. Hollingsworth
2003-11-07
ch 1,
Hey, thanks for the review.

Anyway, onto the actual review:
I liked your use of words quite a bit, but I'm not entirely sure I followed what happened. The descriptions are lovely, but confusing. And, as the previous reviewer said, this would make for a lovely starting point to build upon, but I don't know if I like it as a one-shot.

Sincerely,
Kristopher G. Hollingsworth
lauren
2003-11-07
ch 1,
This is a beautiful introduction.
You have captivated me with your words.
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