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| M.D.Irvine 2006-04-07 ch 1, | i like it esp. the beginning but somehow it seems to be hanging, i guess i expected it to be longer. i also thot seeing double was amazing but i left a different review for it.id love if u could R&R my fics. |
| Wylderaven 2006-02-16 ch 1, | I really like this. Beautiful description - I would like to see if this could go further - but this is from someone who can't seem to end her own stories - so maybe best to ignore that...despite that - I like this. I'll read more of your posts once I'm not so near to sleep. |
| Darkest Dream 2006-01-08 ch 1, | well said, amazing story. |
| a24HourSmile 2005-08-04 ch 1, | Wow. This. Is. Great. I did a report on dowry deaths once. Yeah. This story reminds me of that. But I love it. Short. Simple. Powerful. I |
| EoSpHoRuS 2005-07-21 ch 1, | Red? Come on. What happend to good old fashioned white?! White... and how freakin young is she?! Poor thing... ~Meg |
| Chronic.Vertigo 2005-07-15 ch 1, | Oh...very angsty...lol. I like it ^_^. Short, sweet, and to the point. |
| aitvaras 2004-09-18 ch 1, | Ooh, I've read this before. =D I'm just reviewing here so I can add you to my Author Alert list. xD (This is Grace, by the way! Haha, I stalk you everywhere!) |
| Asmodeus Sanity 2004-02-10 ch 1, | i love the vivid descripotiions. very sad, yet realistic. love the angst. good job, you should post more. |
| K.G. Hollingsworth 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Hey, thanks for the review. Anyway, onto the actual review: I liked your use of words quite a bit, but I'm not entirely sure I followed what happened. The descriptions are lovely, but confusing. And, as the previous reviewer said, this would make for a lovely starting point to build upon, but I don't know if I like it as a one-shot. Sincerely, Kristopher G. Hollingsworth |
| lauren 2003-11-07 ch 1, | This is a beautiful introduction. You have captivated me with your words. |