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the-truth-is-verity
2008-08-24
ch 11,
abuseWell. First off, i'd like to say that this is absolutely brilliant! I've been putting off reading it for a while because, to be honest, i was unsure whether a good crime drama could be pulled off in 11 chapters, but you exceeded my expections by more than a mile.
I absolutely loved it - all the way through :D
Keep writing XD
Casey and the Golden Leaf B...
2008-08-13
ch 11,
abuseI would've googled the dang book.

I would have gotten so mad at everyone for jut being alive.

I loved it though.
The Crazy Freak
2008-08-05
ch 11,
abuseThis story is pure love!! ^^ I love crime stories! So mix that with some romance, and you've got me hooked. =P
I was afraid this is gonna have an unhappy ending, but I'm glad things worked out in the end. =)
Adri
2008-07-13
ch 11, anon.
abuseit wont let me sign in =[ but this story was awesome!
Tinkering
2008-06-27
ch 11,
abuseWeird and cool! Pretty different! I'm still mildly confused, but I like it.

I loved th esappy ending *sighs happily* I like a happy ending, lol.
Sangre Azul
2008-02-19
ch 11, anon.
abuseOverall this was a thoroughly enjoyable story :)
Quite simply it was a good read and if it was a real book it'd be a book I'd be proud to display on my bookshelf.
You obviously have a lot of talent :)
a.notherzhang
2008-01-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseI'm enjoying this a lot so far! But I did pick up a few tiny typos (though I doubt you'll want to go back and fix them now that it's been a few years).

"I wondered in and took a seat by the counter." It should be "I wandered in," right? Unless this is another one of those British-English vs. American-English differences...

Just wanted to point that out to you, even if you don't follow through with it. And I'd like to add that I think your plot is really unusual and interesting and puts a nice twist on the common slashfic, which tends to focus purely on the two main characters. :D
True.Randomness
2008-01-22
ch 11,
abuseThis story was wonderful. I loved the suspence, the romance, the cliche, it was fantastic. I couldn't be more satisfied about hoe the plot develop smoothely or how the ending was conclusive. This was a great work piece.
Mona May
2008-01-11
ch 11,
abuseYour fic is awesome! I was a little worried abot the plot beeing a little too cliché but you managed to keep it original and interesting from the beginning to the end.

I loved the characters, especially Blake and Callum off course.
The ending was nice and happy without being too sappy which is great ^^
CrayonMentality
2008-01-10
ch 8,
abuseBlake is adorable!
This is kinda confusing but still good. The whole Callum-might-be-a-murderer thing is kind of worrying. ^^'
sdad
2008-01-09
ch 10, anon.
abuseYou know
You had me utterly confused up until this chapter.
You're extremely good at keeping people on the edge of their seat you know?
This has to be the best story i've ever read
reger
2008-01-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseWow
At first I wasn't really interested but you've really got me on the edge of my seat for this story.
Lady E
2007-12-14
ch 11,
abuseI almost have nothing to say. :) This is truly a nugget of gold on this site. Creative, funny, well-written, well-organized. Solid all the way through. I very, very much enjoyed it.
exancientgod
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuseWow. Too cool. *_* Some parts did seem kind of unbelievable (e.g. their being accepted as cousins so easily), but then the total awsomeness of the whole idea behind the story pretty much made up for that.

Very interesting and lots of fun. And much love for Blake and Callum, who made me feel all melty. [loves on]
caramel blazers
2007-09-22
ch 11,
abusegood story. does that mean that william was gay??
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