HOW CLEVER! thrilling! damn. let's see, you've got everything down: well-written, funny, nice romance, suspense, a lot of mystery...i was actually dying of smiling towards the end of chapter 10 - that game with william was too cute! and then things started to get really really really exciting even more towards the end of chapter 10 because I was all like, what's going to happen, this is supposed to be the end and nothing is happening yet...and you managed to hold everything off until the last couple of paragraphs! you deserve a medal for pulling this thing together! you should be published. most crime novels are actual crap but this one is charming, cool and a hell of a ride!

At first, I was worried about a possible cliche plot, but you handled that wonderfully. The characters were well-fleshed and the mystery well-built - I definitively didn't see the end coming! This is a great, great story.

I really liked this story. I thought it was funny reading about the mixed tapes part. That's old school. I like Muse too. :)

one of my favorites.
happy holidays and keep writing.

Aw, so cute. I loved the story and the characters.

... am I completely insane, or is the first chapter not showing up? I'm not having the same problem with any of the other chapters, which is weird. If this is some weird site glitch, I hope it resolves itself soon, because I've heard good things about this!

It took me forever... and a day... and a half... to finish reading this fic. (Probably that has something to do with the fact that I started reading it a while ago, stopped at chapter six because I was reading at 2 AM, forgot about it because of the 2 AM thing, and only rediscovered it tonight- upon which I realised I had forgotten the plot and had to go back and reread.)

Um, but obviously the point of that description is that this story was worth going to all that trouble for. It was really interesting, not at all difficult to follow (though I had to slowly translate Blake and William's sarcasm game), the development of the sort-of relationship between Blake and Callum was cute, and I certainly didn't guess ahead of time who the killer was. Job well done... and I'll probably check out some of your other fics... but perhaps I won't stay up until 2 AM this time, eh?

Well. First off, i'd like to say that this is absolutely brilliant! I've been putting off reading it for a while because, to be honest, i was unsure whether a good crime drama could be pulled off in 11 chapters, but you exceeded my expections by more than a mile.
I absolutely loved it - all the way through :D
Keep writing XD

I would've googled the dang book.

I would have gotten so mad at everyone for jut being alive.

I loved it though.

This story is pure love!! ^^ I love crime stories! So mix that with some romance, and you've got me hooked. =P
I was afraid this is gonna have an unhappy ending, but I'm glad things worked out in the end. =)

it wont let me sign in =[ but this story was awesome!

Weird and cool! Pretty different! I'm still mildly confused, but I like it.

I loved th esappy ending *sighs happily* I like a happy ending, lol.

Overall this was a thoroughly enjoyable story :)
Quite simply it was a good read and if it was a real book it'd be a book I'd be proud to display on my bookshelf.
You obviously have a lot of talent :)

I'm enjoying this a lot so far! But I did pick up a few tiny typos (though I doubt you'll want to go back and fix them now that it's been a few years).

"I wondered in and took a seat by the counter." It should be "I wandered in," right? Unless this is another one of those British-English vs. American-English differences...

Just wanted to point that out to you, even if you don't follow through with it. And I'd like to add that I think your plot is really unusual and interesting and puts a nice twist on the common slashfic, which tends to focus purely on the two main characters. :D

This story was wonderful. I loved the suspence, the romance, the cliche, it was fantastic. I couldn't be more satisfied about hoe the plot develop smoothely or how the ending was conclusive. This was a great work piece.