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| Fallen_Angel_Daniela 2006-06-28 ch 1,  | Hi!! I wanted you to know that your story's really good! =^_^= Just 1 little problem, in my opinion... ... ... ... ... ... z... ... ... ... You're probably asleep by now, huh? Sorry! I'll tell ya what , in MY opinion, is the problem:... (please don't be mad, Please Don't Be Mad, PLEASE DON'T BE MAD) ... it was a bit, just a lil bit TOO short!! There! I said it!... ... ... ... T__T ... ... ... a-are y-yo-you mad a-a-at me-e-e?... ... I hope you aren't.Don't take it the bad way, I mean, a story with this high quality level (even though Kai said he "H-A-T-E-D it"... but we can't trust HIS tastes, can we??... don't take me wrong Kai, in case you get to read this review, you have... hum... exquisite tastes... yeah that's it!! Exquisite tastes!), and I must be honest, I liked your story very much, it's just that I (and many others like me) like more details in story, as the decoration of a room, cloths description, expressions, other facts, happening or accidents... just to make the story a bit more intense and exciting, so that we won't sleep, even breath, till we finished reading. ... Look, I know you're probably bored to dead by now, just to read this EXTREMELY LLONGG review (kick me, shoot me, kill me!!), but what I wrote came from my heart, full of hope that it will help you to write even better than what you do now... ... By the way, do you have Msn Messenger? If you do, please add me: fallen.light@hotmail.com, just for some talking... and maybe (hopefully) to make a new friendship... ~_^ Thankx for reading it till here, for I shall not take you any more time(a bit too formal, maybe?) Hope to hear from you soon... mail me something if you like, answer or a critic to what I've written... Fallen_Angel_Daniela |
| They Call Me A Gerbil 2005-02-19 ch 1,  | You should move this to fanfiction . net |
| l. fayette 2004-05-17 ch 1, | Aww...Poor kid, he thought he had been replaced, lol! |
| crimson-crawler 2003-11-14 ch 1, | Yeba I read a beyblade fic for the first time ^_^ Your work is interesting so pls. continue. sorry but I don't like the kissy mushy part...I think they're to young for that stuff hehe ^_^v |
| saccurra 2003-11-07 ch 1, | I personally do not like beyblade, and I personally do not like their dubbed names. You should create your own stories, not based on other stories. Keep it going... |