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Reviews For: On Midnight and Forests
Miamouse 2003-11-16 . chapter 1
I love the word, 'silvan', it really is beautiful.

I enjoyed reading this, simply because it is simple and so... soft, in a way. I hope that's the right word to use, but it's as if it would be soft to the touch, if it was a thing. But anyway, I liked this, a lot.

Mia
mezzie 2003-11-14 . chapter 1
not spectacular, but not aiming to be either, and that is not a bad thing; it is simple, but sweet. airs of late-night wanderings and sky musings. i don't like the use of '&' though. it seems to detract. i can see your effort to find the way and the right way to bring into language the senses and impressions you feel. good use of descriptive words. i like 'my vague dread of dawn'.
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