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| me 2006-02-10 ch 1, | I really like the flow of the poem. And while it is angsty it really focuses on the effects on others which is cool. Keep it up and write what you feel! |
| ruler of the known world 2005-11-27 ch 1, | Wow...I just...wow. It's very good, and very dark. Which appeals to me. Make it dark and morbid and I just eat it up. Anyway, I love the last part about the comfy little jacket. I love how you add that dark humor. All in all, it's a very good poem. |
| Passing 2005-04-23 ch 1, | Your choice of rhyming scheme is beautiful and comes across naturally. I especially loved the honesty in this poem, the lack of imagery and flowery descriptions. |
| attaasa 2004-11-30 ch 1, | wow... your writing is so good, it's just that you write on such depressing subjects! still, it's a great break from what i usually read. Great work! keep it up! |
| the Prince's Jewel 2003-11-08 ch 1, | You do these well. Creepy subject, but good writing. I like your work. |
| Account 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Oh my god... Kat-chan, this is...amazing. It is so, so, perfect. You have the most wonderful way of speaking your feelings through poetry, and I adore it to no end. This is so sad, and even better then Blindingly White. I shivered when I read this, it was that good. You have so much talent! So, so much. Prof. Delusional |