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| anatidaephobiac 2004-04-06 ch 5,   | just wanted to point out in ch. 2 you called mallory, taylor, and in ch. 5, you called evan, jason |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-04-06 ch 10, | i like this story... i hope you get time to update. |
| bryansangel8-16-03 2004-02-24 ch 10, | I think your story is really good and it doesn't jump around alot... you make it really clear when your going to change POV and it's a good story line... i like it and can not wait to read more... |
| HighOnAirGurl 2003-12-14 ch 9, | hey hey! its me, carmel march! i just changed my name, thats all! i really really LOVED this chappie! lots of emotions swirling though it! thanks for updating to! ~carm~ ps could you possible read my new story? i just want some opinoins. |
| Emma 2003-12-10 ch 9, | yay the chapter will be up by the end of week. Good on ya! |
| jules2206 2003-12-10 ch 9, | hey, great story, they really love each other so much its so sweet aw, am loving it heaps pelase update soon, BUBBAI! |
| HighOnAirGurl 2003-12-05 ch 8, | DUDE! im am SO SO SO SO sorry that i couldnt review sooner! i ve been-no, i wont even go into the details! these two past chappies were really fantastic! i loved them! now i cant wait for more!' ~carm~ |
| Emma 2003-11-29 ch 8, | i like this story heaps!! I can't wait till the next chappie!! Make sure you update ASAP |
| HighOnAirGurl 2003-11-11 ch 6, | like it? are you kidding? i positivly LOVE it! this story is so great! i just cant get over that, can i? heehee! cant wait until more chappies! thanks ~carm~ |
| HighOnAirGurl 2003-11-09 ch 5, | oh! that was great! heehee! i love how they 'slept' together! that was funny! i hope you update very soon! very very soon! thanks, ~carm~ |
| HighOnAirGurl 2003-11-08 ch 4, | oh! that was brilliant! definitely on my favs list! please update as soon as possible! thankies, ~carm~ |
| HighOnAirGurl 2003-11-08 ch 2, | hey-lo! i ove this story so far! its fantastic! im of to the next chappie! thanks! ~carm~ |
| Katie96 2003-11-07 ch 4, | I really enjoyed reading this story!! I cannot wait to read more! Keep up the great work! |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-11-07 ch 4, | long romantic sigh... |