It's so nice when something so small packs such a powerful punch. i really like this one. You and I seem to be on the same set of pages. I always enjoy reading your stuff. I hope that you enjoy mine just as much. Well, I'm off. *Maybe I'll write another poem.* Great job. *K

Pff. Sad, despite it's random taste.

"Touch the abstract and weep"

And you know what, I dunno if you meant it like this, but it's also kind of a moving on...sort of...feel...*twitch*

Sorry. Blame it entirely on the strong tea. _-

A bit depressing, but well-written nonetheless. I really like the line

"Touch the abstract and weep"

And then..

"Mourn the death of your sparkle"

I know how that feels...

a delightful little dabble into crazytalk.