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| Isca 2008-10-24 ch 1,   | 'From a very distant age.' I liked the mystic quality to that line. I liked how this poem showed the true nature of Pagans (i.e. the pure of heart), and then contrasted that with some common stereotypes (e.g. liars, haters, the crude, etc). Blessed Be, ~Isca |
| Andaren 2008-04-29 ch 1, | I loved it! Keep up the good work, will definately read more of your stuff soon. Blessed Be, Andaren x |
| FlamingSoul 2004-02-09 ch 1, | I'm reading this and wandering if your wiccan or not. Are you? From what I've read it seems you are since you obviously know what your talking about. I was just wondering since many people write from a different point of view, even in their poetry. This is written well, even though I do not agree with you. |
| Endless Abyss 2004-01-02 ch 1, | I love this! I'm not a wicca myself, but my best friend is and she recently had to endure racism at the movie theater where she worked and is no longer allowed to wear her wiccan cross. I'm sick of seeing such religious intolerance. Seeing a beautiful poem like this makes me feel much better. ~ Endless |
| tawnyfawn 2003-12-28 ch 1, | I'm pagan and I think it's really good that you wrote this poem because even in todays time some people still do discriminate. Really well written and keep it up. |
| Semjaza 2003-12-20 ch 1, | Nice poem. This place needs more witchy-type stuff. ~Semjaza~ |
| Xhara 2003-12-09 ch 1, | Wow! I love this. I know exactly what is felt here. I get it from my own mother. I really love the poem, the emotion flows through the page. ~Xhara |
| Haven of the Shadows 2003-12-05 ch 1, | I really like this poem, it's true, wiccans get blamed and hated for so much when it's probably one of the only/few religions that hasn't started a war. |
| aulliana 2003-11-08 ch 1, | The ending of this made me want to jump up and cheer for some reason. There is SO much strong emotion! I love the message it conveys, too. Keep writing!! ~~aulliana~~ |
| Alyx Bradford 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Lovely. Quite heartfelt, and I appreciate the sentiment. Rock on. |
| karmakaze 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Rock on! I know what it's like to be discriminated against as a Wiccan. But, now that I'm in high school I've found some others, which rocks! Great poem! |