kool. Dat was very descriptive? I think that’s the word. Keep writing
rathe ke rani

I love this so far! Your writing is beautiful. I really like your descriptive style. It's really, at the risk of sounding cheesy, a joy to read. ^^ Anyway...can't wait to read more of this.
--Raven

Wonderful descriptions, they really blended in and drew from the beginning very nicely. It's really interesting cause I entered the same contest and came out with something so incredibly different. It's kinda funny I'm just reading yours now, but anyhow, it's amazing, Great Job!

OO, um, YAY! This was so wonderful and I love it so much and thank you thank you thank you ^^. Sorry I took so long to read it I was kinda too dumb to realize you were the same reviewer as the first. I was like duh um where? *ish a lil dense* It was beautiful and I adored it and THANK YOU *kisses your feets*

~Centi