A little creeped out with the part you'll love whoever submits a review, but i though the poem was well written, and scew the flames! People cannot just judge you by a poem, you even said "Don't read if you're a strict christian" if they flame you, they're blind, as well as dumb...i feel better now...enjoy the rest of the time spent reading the comment. *Poof*

I wasn't disgusted or disturbed. I used to think like that. I still do sometimes. If you want to write something seriously disturbing, write something you know will shock most people (parents, friends, anyone else "too good" in your life).

I don't understand why you specifically said in your summarynot for Christians etc. I am one, I know others who are and are more insane than I'll ever be. And personally, well read what I said first at the top.

This is a good way to fill a blank white box.

I don't find this disturbing. I like it. Very dark.

Actually, this box is very plain...
It would look better if it was lime green.
OH! -looks up at the little lightbulb-
Does that answer your question?
I actually think it's funny, but whatever.
-little lightbulb cracks-
DAMN! I knew it was too good to be true...

ugh... no offense, but if i find another piece of dark/angsty poetry on this website, i might throw up.

i thought it was funny...

i don't see what's so disturbing about it.... it's really good though.

you're right. it is a pretty box. i love the poem. it's beautiful. hits very close to home, mind you. i give it my personal wicked socks stamp. :D. keep it up.

*light bulb, ding ding* I liked it..very nicely written and um yea..I loved it heh. I'm loony I know but hey..who isn't?! HA! Anyways now, much enjoyed..bwit xx

I think this is a really good poem. For one thing I'm a "strict Christian", or whatever you want to call it, and I have to say there's nothing in Christianity about FEELINGS. Suicide, yes, we believe that it's wrong, but everyone thinks about it at least once in their lives. So, don't think that Christians are always "intolerant".

That was really deep. I know on more than one occasion I have felt exactly the same. I also know what it feels like to feel utterly alone. Like everything and everyone is against you and if you can't get rid of them, then you might as well get rid of yourself. The emotion in your poem reaches out to me and I want you to know that I really feel you. ~_^ Keep writing it's a great release, isn't it?

momoko: O.O *wails and glomps onto Wufei* Make it go away! It scared me! *sniffle*
Wufei: Shut up, weakling!

Homcidal maniac johnny... that's the first thing that came to mind. READ IT. HAPPY NOODLE BOY! ehehehe! Besides that... good poem... you got the idea down and it sound good unlike some others i've seen. Nice work

hello again :).....do be do be doooooo......hehehhehehehe
OH YHA!! forgot...i loved your poem.
::bows at your feet::
Im not worthy...Im not worthy...Im not worthy

*smiles with a soft laugh* This just sounds too much like my writing. Absolutely beautiful in its own twisted little way. I love it.
*reads thingi at the bottom of page* Hmm...have you ever read Johnny the Homicidal Maniac? I think you might enjoy it, if you haven't. Your writing reminds me of more poetic Johnen Vasquez stuff.
Anyway, I'll stop taking up your time. I just wanted to compliment you.

Dark Delights,
Ryu