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| Cookie Gestapo 2005-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseShort but discriptive. I like how everything fits. "Her heart is as cold as the winter she lives in." Good description because not only are you explaining an emotion but her way of thought also. |
| jive maxwell 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, my, how I love angsty poems. This is a good one, like a song. |
| Unholy Haven 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is good! Sad! |
| Electra Black 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I really liked this! It was just wow. Keep it up! |
| Peanuthead 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abusewow, so emotive and amazing. x |
| MageDay 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseVery deep ;) I love it! ~DaystormMage |
| Punk'd 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWow...intense...u shud keep writing...ur talented...and plus someone will review my work! |