Reviews for Inadequate Words - FictionPress.com

avidelecteur 2003-11-08 ch 1,	This seems to have two morals. You're saying that you care infinitely about this person, but you're also saying that words are inadequate, right? I can't quite tell which is supposed to be more important, but I think it's the former. If so, the title doesn't quite fit, I think. If you're making the latter your more important point, I'd change the last line. But now I sound like I don't like your poem, which isn't true. It's not one of your best, but it's one of the better poems I've read overall, so I really should stop complaining. This was yet another good job.
vers le sud 2003-11-08 ch 1,	Oh, WOW. I guess the greatest thing a poet can wish for is for his or her poems to touch something deep within the reader, something within their soul...and that's exactly what this did for me. I cried... Brilliant, gorgeous work. Keep writing!
DeadRaven69 2003-11-07 ch 1,	i can so relate to this poem, its very good, i like it. and the last line summarized everything well, its really good!