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| Random Human 2003-12-11 ch 1,   | I love your style of poetry. I'm not sure what it is, 0.o ...but whatever it is I like it! ^_^ Very pretty. |
| NoMercy 2003-11-09 ch 1, | WOW, nice poem. Very nice. I actually enjoyed reading it. *claps* nice job, man. -He who shows No Mercy |
| IHJ 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Simplistic, yet it says a lot. Like the structure you use, makes every line stand out. Good job. Izzy J. |
| burp 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Very good rhythm and style. Waiting hurts, doesn't it. Especially when they don't come. Which is what you said. So I guess I didn't have to say it again. I'll be quiet now. -_-; |
| Victor Soulstorm 2003-11-07 ch 1, | I like the style it was written in, nice job. |
| DeadRaven69 2003-11-07 ch 1, | i like it a lot, its so simple, not a lot of word usage, but it gets the point across. its really good |
| Red-Rogue 2003-11-07 ch 1, | It was beautiful... |