Reviews for lilies and brimstone

JessyNick 2004-03-03 ch 1,	Hey, just reading a few of your poems, and some of the quotes really stick out to me, so I wanted to know that it all looks good :). ~Jess~
poetry-daemon 2003-11-19 ch 1,	Very good, especially the second stanza. I think that the first and last could use work though. Good job!
Lady B.V Rose 2003-11-08 ch 1,	Oh...wow...this just swept me into another world...I ADORED the last stanza...beautiful... - BVR xx
The Black Rider 2003-11-08 ch 1,	I've in been such a romantic mood lately that there was no way I couldn't not love this poem. I thought the second stanza was a bit clunky (particularly in the last two lines) but apart from that the rhythm and the emotions of the poem were so beautiful...I don't know; I'm just a sucker for these things. The last stanza was perfect.
Victor Soulstorm 2003-11-07 ch 1,	don't worry about it, your pretty much anonymous in a place like this. good poem, keep writing.
beatrice milly 2003-11-07 ch 1,	awesomeness! dont bother feeling shy. the beauty of it all is that if anyone you know reads it you can be like... uh... its metaphorical. lol have fun writing love, melanie YOUR FIRST REVIEWER lol