Hey, just reading a few of your poems, and some of the quotes really stick out to me, so I wanted to know that it all looks good :).
~Jess~

Very good, especially the second stanza. I think that the first and last could use work though. Good job!

Oh...wow...this just swept me into another world...I ADORED the last stanza...beautiful...

- BVR xx

I've in been such a romantic mood lately that there was no way I couldn't not love this poem. I thought the second stanza was a bit clunky (particularly in the last two lines) but apart from that the rhythm and the emotions of the poem were so beautiful...I don't know; I'm just a sucker for these things. The last stanza was perfect.

don't worry about it, your pretty much anonymous in a place like this. good poem, keep writing.

awesomeness! dont bother feeling shy. the beauty of it all is that if anyone you know reads it you can be like... uh... its metaphorical. lol

have fun writing

love, melanie YOUR FIRST REVIEWER
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