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| doubleb19 2004-11-24 ch 1, | I really liked this. unlike others, I can't describe why. |
| axica 2004-02-23 ch 1, | yeah yeah, you're work is good there aren't many other ways i can think of repeating the same thing over again the imagery is good, the rhyming is good, the words are powerful, a little bit pessimistic, but I've always found that to be realistic you're good at this keep at it |