kickass

O, a time machine! lol, uh... nuttin else 2 say, just that.

very nice. see, i'm R&Ring like a good girl :p
now...what the hell kind of a chapter ending was that crap! ARGH!
kill you now...burstintoflames...burstintoflames...hehehe
good story though...ending still sucked...
hate you...argh!!
Becky
(damn multiple personalities)

Me again... and all I have to say is... POOR POOR Dio... why are you so mean to him? and awe, Dusty's so... alone and lost. :D Byez

Exellent, It seems you have put alot of time and work towards every chapter. Each one tells the story clearly. Flows really well with each other. Some chapters also made me think. The thoughts are well done, go at the right times in the story and also reminds the reader on whats happaned. Very spritial, keep up the good work. *Thumbs up*

Wow, awesome goodness! I find it hard to review in the middle of the story because things that i find that might not fit rite now might have a purpose in the plot, so i'll review again at the end of the story. But for not this is your best so far!