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| jennilyn.rose 2006-03-29 ch 1,   | "Straight in the middle, like a game of darts" I love that line. Wonderful song. Nice emotion and flow. |
| Shy Cutie89 2004-08-08 ch 1, | wow, great poem, very powerful. i think it was make a really good song. that was an excellent poem. it had great meaning to it and its very true. definetely keep writing and have fun! |
| Lily Elise 2004-05-15 ch 1, | That was sad...beautiful song! |
| Crimson Riley 2004-02-10 ch 1, | Beautiful! The words are just so vivid, the portray your emotions so well! |