Wow, that was great. The topic of dreams is one I am fascinated with, yet I always find it hard to explain their true beauty. And here, you have done just that in 15 words. Excellent, I loved this, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Wow. Very nice. I like a bit of rhyme you included, and I totally identify with your sentiment. :)

I've just one question. Aren't haikus usually short-long-short or 5-7-5? I thought they were, but your piece doesn’t follow that pattern. Are you just using a variant I haven't heard of before, or is it something else?

Wonderful, keep up the good work.

Hi! this is really good! Beautifully written, well done!

Cya )

*Winged Girl

beautiful :) and very true.

Wow that was beautiful!