Hi! thanks for reviewing my poems. i appricitate it so much. So i swore to return the favor...then i saw how many freaking poems you had and all i can say is E GAD! I thought i was a writing machine with my fifty somthing poems! But i will keep my promise. Loved the poem and i can't wait to read the other fifty million... oh boy. this is gonna take a while.

absoultly excellent u are the bomb baby

I like the feel of this, midieval is great! Do be careful, though, using the lingo of those times... Thou and Thy are NOT interchangeable, meaning you and your respectively. Also, "ere" is meaning "before".

The piece was really nifty overall, coming together nicely at the last stanza. The last part holding to best use of the aged verbage. Nice job!

-Draith