You're a talented writer. I loved this poem. Unlike other poems, I actually wanted to continue reading.

Intriguing.

Oh wow, this is beautiful... Despite the topic, it isn't angsty at all! Good job!

Lovely poem. I really like how you speak of her as earth's bride and the word choices are fantastic!

Maybe you should watch out for conventions, however.

Anyways, a splendid job! Keep it up.