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| Charity F 2008-02-13 ch 1,   | I especially like the soft warm sounds in "warm" and "gone". To me it seems a bit superfluous and I find myself not entirely understanding your gist. Maybe you could have extended this into something longer with more depth, so that you could explore these ideas further? |
| poetic abortion 2006-07-06 ch 1, | Beautiful; you make angst just as addictive as love. ~* Noelle |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-21 ch 1, | beautiful.. I love the red thing.. nice job |
| Morwain 2006-05-03 ch 1, | hm...interesting |
| Aquafied 2006-04-30 ch 1, | red rain is warm-i can taste that ahh, i say that too much do you know if you review too much you start having a review book of what your mind knows to say for example:"ah, interestingi really like the taste in this piece" (so i was looking at the things i cant ask you are you gaga? that made me laugh and i am way too off topic for myself sometimes. i apologize) |
| Lana Mira Beth 2006-04-30 ch 1, | Cool. Sounds like a sexual relationship where one party has deeper feelings that the other party has no idea of. I dunno tho, maybe I'm just crazy. And thanks for the many reviews, and, I'll let you in on a little secret: As much as I can write in French, I make a million and one mistakes just speaking casually, since, it's my second language. And I'm jealous that you speak German (and btw you speak English better than most English people do, so be proud!) Because, I'm part German (I'm part everything!), and I've always wanted to be able to speak German. :) |
| Kusje 2006-04-30 ch 1, | I like your style and how you write your poems. Snipped, Cutt and Pasted sweetly. I loved it. You also like Japanese? I do too. :DHajimemashite! |
| boys kiss girls 2006-04-29 ch 1, | oh crazy! i like the imagry. good job. |
| sunday night sky 2005-05-10 ch 1, | this is really well written, short, to the point, accurate. good analogies too. keep going! |
| doska 2004-09-18 ch 1, | Ein sehr schönes Gedicht. Es stimmt einen nachdenklich! Doska |
| Ed Girl 2004-08-13 ch 1, | wow i have nothing to say to praise this "sits dumbstruck" lol i humbly bow to u |
| Bob n Kazzi 2004-06-18 ch 1, | I'm guessing the three meanings of "last" are - and don't hit me if I am wrong - _ Last Night - as in the previous night Last Night - as in the last ever night Last Night - as in "go on forever" night _ Am I right? _ I loved this, honestly! |
| FAKE?romances 2004-06-06 ch 1, | wow...loved it. |
| hoellenwauwau 2004-04-19 ch 1, | WOW. mysteriös! Die Sache mit dem "last" ist einfach genial - das Gedicht an sich auch. Faszinierend. Würd schon sagen, dass es um Liebe - oder eine Form davon - geht... cio, hoellenwauwau |
| MistrissD 2004-04-12 ch 1, | So dark and so beautiful |