As ussual, that was really pretty. I always look forward to reading your stuff because of the visualizations that it puts in me 'ead. Ok, that was weird, I just started talking funny and I don't don't know why. But anyway, getting back to the review, you did great...again ^.~
-Esen Kurai

very well writen. you are a great writer so keep up the good work

wow... that was a really good poem. i loved how you wrote it... you have a great style... keep it up! please read and review some of my stuff if you get the chance... thanks:)