|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| kears 2004-08-21 ch 8, | please write more and update ASAP. This is a wonderful story. I love the characters (except Riley; he's such a jerk!). great descriptions. |
| DBlack 2004-07-31 ch 6, | Okay, you had better be *very* glad I have no idea where you live. Because if I did, I would currently be camped out on your front lawn. Excellent, excellent, dramatic without being melodramatic, sad in a way that pinches my heart...you captured a terrible issue beautfully and realistically. Waiting for an update...and checking back as often as I can. |
| Alani Lin 2003-12-11 ch 6, | Wow, really great story. Please, please, please update! |
| Lovesick Fool 2003-11-20 ch 6, | -jaw drops open and hits ground- Okay...that was freakin awesome... |
| Pas 2003-11-18 ch 1, | I commend you love...its awesome, and as i've said before you have potienal...and talent |
| Papillon Sierra 2003-11-08 ch 1, | i like it! keep going! |
| mercury-phoenix 2003-11-08 ch 1, | I want to read chapter two now...please continue, this is pretty good...and a good way of working character descriptions in... ~Laerwen |
| YourLovelyDemise 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Sounds amazing so far! Please Please Please make it a priority. I want to read the rest...please!! And please, review some of my stuff if you ever get bored ^_^ |
| Pas 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Wow...Bri...that's awesome...a lot better and deeper than anything I will ever write |