quite interesting.
yup. that's a perfect word.
'interesting'
has a good ring to it doesn't it?
~aven the raven~
appearances can be decieving *wink and giggle* tee hee.

I was able to see what you were writing. Someone that was bruised and broken, surrounded by shards of a mirror. . .black eyes, blue lips, just an outline of a person. . .myself. I saw myself in this poem. I am actually, in the formal and informal sense of the word, insane (paranoid schizophrenic, to be exact) so I know the feeling. It's so scary.
One side note: This one seemed slightly incomplete to me. I mean, it left me wanting more.
-Jessica

well-written.

Wow. You're absolutely right in saying its probably one of your best. If not the best. Every line is so perfect...amazing.

Another morbid haiku, hehe, don't see too many of them. Once again, you have used a series of intense words to convey a powerful image. Keep it up.
*cosmo-queen*

Your great use of imagery made the haiku very vivid. Loved the words "broken mirror" and "human mist". Well done!

too cool!

Wow. Thats really deep. Thanx for the review and I'm hoping to see more haikus under your name!

Disturbingly beautiful.

makes me sick at the thought. great job! ^_^

Heehee . . . I liked the phrase "human mist." Nice imagery.

I can feel the anger but yet i don't understand the subject that your trying to convey.

This is good, though I'll have to think about it for a while before I'll be able to fully understand this, I think. (That was a complicated sentence... Please tell me if I made any grammar mistakes... English isn't my first language.)