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| Silent Scars 2003-11-08 ch 1,   | I love the use of simile with the 'crumpled picnic blanket,' with the first few lines it had made me think of the characters as beign vampires. Good imaginative thoughts. Keep writing. |
| CaramelCream 2003-11-08 ch 1, | I'm sorry but i dont get it. I'm a very curious person so can you PLEASE e-mail me with you meaning. Please. Sorry |
| Ellerfru 2003-11-08 ch 1, | great poem! dunno what else to say... |