I really enjoyed reading this. Losing a friend is tough and it's something I can realte to. Nice job.

Short, but sweet. Very nice. I enjoyed it. Losing people is hard.. no matter what way they're lost.
Tokiko

that was sweet, and sad.

though the poem is short, it is certainly filled with the emotion you felt.

(can't wait to read the next poem!)

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I really like your poem, it reminds me of when my uncle died. I know that to you it signifies your friend moving, but for some reason it reminds me of that day. Well awesome work, please fill free to checkout my work, tell me what you think :)

great poem... i know how it feels to have a friend move away... it sucks... please read and review some of my stuff if you get the chance... thanks:)