Baboon... mating? If that doesn't give your readers images, I don't wanna know what will.

ew... they gotta get rid of that hobo!
Funny story btw.

Lol! That's...funny in a sick way. I liked the way they all watched the women's channel.
"This is my lifelong dream!" haha

I would compare this to the work of H.H. Munro (Saki)... but it's absolutely nowhere near comprable. Never mind. A job well done, in any case.

Woo.

That was hillarious.

I never guess that. I was thinking it would be a coat hanger or coat or something.

Anyways, that was great.

Very funny very weird very English. If your goal is still to write like me you have succeeded.

Ah, who doesn't love the smell of dead hobo in the evening. Great story. It made me giggle.

haha!! crazy stuff, but good stuff! I liked what you had going on there

Really creative! I love it! Excellent plot, nothing ever done. Please continue it, make something else unexpected happen...could you imagine a dead hobo zombie murderer? O_o

man you are crazy

.:Falls over laughing:. Ahh, that was hilarious, and very much like the works of Douglas Adams. You rock my socks.