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Reviews For: In the Coat Closet

Saeger
2004-03-16
ch 1,
Baboon... mating? If that doesn't give your readers images, I don't wanna know what will.
Jane Mullane
2004-01-06
ch 1,
ew... they gotta get rid of that hobo!
Funny story btw.
VoicesOfViolence
2003-12-14
ch 1,
Lol! That's...funny in a sick way. I liked the way they all watched the women's channel.
"This is my lifelong dream!" haha
Whizzothecrunchyfrog
2003-11-29
ch 1,
I would compare this to the work of H.H. Munro (Saki)... but it's absolutely nowhere near comprable. Never mind. A job well done, in any case.
Surautomatism
2003-11-16
ch 1,
Woo.

That was hillarious.

I never guess that. I was thinking it would be a coat hanger or coat or something.

Anyways, that was great.
funky munky
2003-11-09
ch 1,
Very funny very weird very English. If your goal is still to write like me you have succeeded.
mindwarped
2003-11-09
ch 1,
Ah, who doesn't love the smell of dead hobo in the evening. Great story. It made me giggle.
BankruptOnSelling
2003-11-08
ch 1,
haha!! crazy stuff, but good stuff! I liked what you had going on there
YourLovelyDemise
2003-11-08
ch 1,
Really creative! I love it! Excellent plot, nothing ever done. Please continue it, make something else unexpected happen...could you imagine a dead hobo zombie murderer? O_o
William Revolution
2003-11-08
ch 1,
man you are crazy
Circus
2003-11-08
ch 1,
.:Falls over laughing:. Ahh, that was hilarious, and very much like the works of Douglas Adams. You rock my socks.
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