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| Saeger 2004-03-16 ch 1, | Baboon... mating? If that doesn't give your readers images, I don't wanna know what will. |
| Jane Mullane 2004-01-06 ch 1, | ew... they gotta get rid of that hobo! Funny story btw. |
| VoicesOfViolence 2003-12-14 ch 1, | Lol! That's...funny in a sick way. I liked the way they all watched the women's channel. "This is my lifelong dream!" haha |
| Whizzothecrunchyfrog 2003-11-29 ch 1, | I would compare this to the work of H.H. Munro (Saki)... but it's absolutely nowhere near comprable. Never mind. A job well done, in any case. |
| Surautomatism 2003-11-16 ch 1, | Woo. That was hillarious. I never guess that. I was thinking it would be a coat hanger or coat or something. Anyways, that was great. |
| funky munky 2003-11-09 ch 1, | Very funny very weird very English. If your goal is still to write like me you have succeeded. |
| mindwarped 2003-11-09 ch 1, | Ah, who doesn't love the smell of dead hobo in the evening. Great story. It made me giggle. |
| BankruptOnSelling 2003-11-08 ch 1, | haha!! crazy stuff, but good stuff! I liked what you had going on there |
| YourLovelyDemise 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Really creative! I love it! Excellent plot, nothing ever done. Please continue it, make something else unexpected happen...could you imagine a dead hobo zombie murderer? O_o |
| William Revolution 2003-11-08 ch 1, | man you are crazy |
| Circus 2003-11-08 ch 1, | .:Falls over laughing:. Ahh, that was hilarious, and very much like the works of Douglas Adams. You rock my socks. |