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| Gurt Rude Malanos 2005-07-31 ch 17,   | This was a good story. Im going 2 start reading the sequal when I have time. Do u live in NYC? just wondering cuz it sounded like they were in New York in 1 of ur storys. lol. thats really kool if u do. |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-08-13 ch 16, | I like both endings...this one was kinda grusome, but it was good. I couldnt really concentrate on it because my stupid brother & sister are annoying me, but I liked it! I added another chapter to my Stooge Stunts story so could u please read & review! Thanks!! |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-07-31 ch 15, | Old malanos sisters here! That was a really good story! Ill read the alternate ending when I have more time. Please read my new ch's in my storys! |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-03-20 ch 8, | Ive already read this chapter, but I got a good prank u can putll. I tried it last year, but we got 2 school 2 late. You get 2 school before ur teacher and toilet paper their desk. Put the toilet papaer all over everything arpound their desk and wrap it all arond the chair. Its really funny. LOL! |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-03-17 ch 13, | Old Malanos sisters here!! Good chapter! Its getting really intense now. Cant wait to read more when I have some time. Thanks 4 all the reviews! I updated my Agents Janitors and Dead Teachers story and my Thr Field Trip That We Turned Wacko one too. Could u please read and review & tell me what u think! Thanks!! |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-03-10 ch 12, | Malanos sisters here! Good chapter! LOL Mr Kaufman is nice for letting them have a snowball fight with him and lieing to get them out of trouble. LOL. I put a new chapter up 4 my agents story if u could please read it. Thanks!! |
| i'm innocent, honest 2004-02-24 ch 16, | I like this ending the most. |
| WolfOfBloodMoon 2004-02-20 ch 17, | Such a good and sad story... But good and sad stories rock! Great job! |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-02-06 ch 11, | LOL. Good chapet. Its interesting. I have a new story up, so could u please try 2 read it. Thanks |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-01-28 ch 10, | Good ch. Please read the new ch in my agents story! Thanks! |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-01-26 ch 9, | Old Malanos Sister Here! Your stry is interesting. Mr. Kaufman seems a little susipicious to me. How do u get so many reviews! I just updated my agents story. |
| blacklives4ever 2004-01-24 ch 17, | That's really sad... |
| blacklives4ever 2004-01-24 ch 16, | Hmm... to me, the second ending made more sense, for some reason. But what really got to me was that description of pulling the towel into that guy and yanking out his stomach. Ick. Good story, but I think you should try rewriting it and maybe adding more detail. Great plot, good characters, everything was great. |
| Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-01-23 ch 5, | Old Malanos Sisters here!! Your story is really good!! Its getting really interesting! Sorry its taking me so long to read more. The only thing is a little bit of grammer mistakes like the tenses. Other than that it is a really good story line. Thanks for all the reviews of my stories! |
| blacklives4ever 2004-01-23 ch 5, | Wouldn't they close down the school if something like this happened? Sorry for so many reviews. I promise I'll stop reviewing for 5 chapters. |