very interesting... I don't think I've ever seen a poem like it, and I am a bit of a poetry nerd, so that's saying something. very cool theme, great description, and extremely original. all around great poem. keep on writing em, cause I'll keep reading!

A great poem. I lov ethe subjext.

hiya! this is pretty! great imagery, nice style
cya =)



- winged girl

Great... I like your fantasy-like style of writing. I'd like to see more of your poems soon. Never stop writing!