no offense, this is a pretty good story, but this PRACTICALLY, ALMOST, NOT QUITE,BUT VERY SIMILAR TO the exact same thing as The Queen of Glass (I think somebody mentioned this already). the language and the cursing is a bit out of place and is pretty too modern for that era. Is very funny. elaborate a bit

u read Queen of Glass by S.J.Maas? yeah, everything's happening exactly the same so far. but who knows? i could just see things strange from way back here on chapter 10 n it coulda been completely different by now. just wanted to tell ya :)

HEY! that was good i only read the first chapter and then i just copied and pasted the rest to word because i got dial up, but whatever. lovely character. bit confusing when she is thinking back to her assasinations and stuff but other than that it is great. ever play FF8 rinoa is a character in the game. but ill read the rest and tell ya what i thought.k. Please R and R my stories. there not as long as yours!

my wasnt that funny. well what gonna happen next? i cant wait to see!
ja ne

Hello. I just found this story today and read through it. I have to say that I really, really like it -- everything about it is done really well. I read your bio after I read this, too. FF7 rocks, lol. And the name Rinoah actually made me think of Rinoa from FF8. Have you played it yet? It's awesome too. Whoops, got a little off subject there (but it is an interesting coincidence, I think). Anyway, just wanted to say keep up the good work. Oh, and if I may say so, I really don't think anyone could be asleep after reading this -- so witty. I haven't laughed so much in a long time!

actually that was quite funny! my what is that nasty little ** planning? but you wont tell me i suppose? no. well... keep it up!
ja ne

you updated!i have been waiting forever! i love this story and its just so funny. it like a rumiko takahashi book where they both hate each other but learn to like each other while being funny about it!
ja ne

wow how can you make it so funny all the damn time! its hilarious (did i spell that right?) keep going!
ja ne

i like your story because i'm also a ff7 and ff8,9,10,x-2 fan.
do you also write for fanfiction.net? you should! much more people will appreciate your work...byebye

i love this story its just so... great words cant explain it!
ja ne

Wow I am returning the review. This is really good. It has a half-elf too awesome. I like the ff7 quotes because it is like the greatest game ever. Keep on writing.

Sivart

i wana know what's gonna happen and they are so perfect for each other! its so funny reading about them arguing! keep up the good work!
ja ne

that was so funny, the characters are interesting and the plot is alittle tiny bit predictable but in a good way! well...
ja ne

aw.what a cute story! update soon!

great job keep writing