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| deathsShadow000 2003-11-27 ch 1,   | Gods, I love this poem. Keep it up..^.^ |
| Hidden Self 2003-11-21 ch 1, | hi again. gud poem, luv it. ~*Hidden Self*~ |
| Seeker of the Way 2003-11-17 ch 1, | I um, am mixed here. I like it, but I can't say why. It may be the obscure wording. But ... It seems like a story but ...I can't tell you why I don't like it either. Damn! You'd think after 125 reviews I'd figure out what to say by now! I hope to give you a better review on another work. Arghh! I can't beleive you stumped me. huh! But, I wanted to review you after you read my stuff. Thanks! And ... I am kinda like you. I NEED poetry to vent. I am really a nice person, but I was not popular, still not. BUt they say pain makes great art! At least I didn't take my angst out in things like raping and pilaging and drugin and boozing and womanizing! Well, I did boozing in college. And ... the womanizing thing is a fantasy that cannot come true cause fate hates me (or is jealous, I haven't figured out which -- jealous probably). --SotW (p.s. IJ was the first person to review me -- YEAH IJ!) |
| Karou 2003-11-11 ch 1, | Oh my...and you thought MINE was good? Are you sure you even read YOURS? ^^; Very detailed and straight to the heart. It feels like I could read your thoughts- as if you're speaking right to me. To me, that is the best kind of writing. This is a peice of art, keep it close to your heart. (OUCH! Horrible non-planned rhyme! Ack!) |
| Silent Scars 2003-11-10 ch 1, | I love the one worded bits that you've placed in there, sometimes it's better to just place a word instead of whole meaningless description; gets too boring. Nice job! |
| underground 2003-11-09 ch 1, | the poem is, well, nice. i think you really can write and you really have the talent. keep writing and good luck. |
| Aimee Raven 2003-11-09 ch 1, | Hey, first of all thnx for your review on my poem 'Sick revenge', lol, i loved ur version of Joy to the World, lol, made me laugh. Anyway i really like this poem, it's simple but poetic and i can relate to it very well...great job! lvoe and good luck, Mia. |
| catanna 2003-11-09 ch 1, | Hm... i think ya have done way better before. This one sounds a little forced, like you aren't really feeling what your poem is suppose to potray. It's either that or yo are waay to choked up with emotion that you can't get the right words out +_+ |
| IHJ 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Too bad FictionPress didn't keep the center format. Well, you already know what I think. Got a bit more of a regular rhythm going here. Nice choice of words. Izzy J. |