Reviews for Summer Time Villa

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NOTPOSTING 2006-03-07 ch 9,	I loved it and hope you plan on updating very very soon!!
wolf-of-the-dark-night 2004-04-30 ch 9,	LET ME GUESS! SOMETHING TO DO WITH THAT DAMN DRAGON! DIE DRAGON DIE! HE HE LOVE THIS STORY SO PLEASE SEQUIL!
magical_dragon_14 2004-04-30 ch 2,	FINALLY A STORY WHERE THE BOY IS NOT PROTECTING THE GIRL! YES! HAHA, SORRY I AM JUST SICK OF THOSE STORIES AND EXPECALLY BECAUSE OF THE FACT THE I CAN BEAT UP ALMOST AL THE GUYS IN MY GRADE, IT IS JUST SO BORING WHEN IT IS THE SAME STORY OVER AND OVER AGAIN! I know that this story is done but I think I'm going to love it!
Laffy Taffy 2004-02-18 ch 9,	yayy! u update, but how r u goin to leave me hanging like dat hah? put da otha story up soon aight and good writing by da way!
me 2004-02-15 ch 8,	omg albert instine popped up on our page omg is he taking this over scary kill him now
FR3d 2004-02-15 ch 9,	sqeeals why not i want more storie nd ohh they are o so cute i sick romamntic love dove type too
hehe me fr3d 2004-02-08 ch 7,	not the best but what the hell ilove you anywho yeah um...yay they show they like each other yay...more ...pa...pa...pa...please byes
LaffyTaffy 2004-01-27 ch 1,	Dang i told u grl, UPDATE! PLEASE!
LaffyTaffy 2004-01-26 ch 1,	Hey i like da story, would it kill u to updated da ** story hah? UPDATE DA DAMN STORY NOW. Please please!
Laffy Taffy 2003-12-16 ch 7,	Nice,keep going aight!
michaela 2003-12-15 ch 7,	love it doll keep writing
Michaela 2003-12-12 ch 6,	Oh my I loved it i cant wait to read the nexst one. I loved all the deatail you put in it lik what there wearing or how they say things. P.S. I hope you knwe my e-mail address
The baava Project 2003-12-05 ch 3,	This was a fun chapter! I absolutely loved the way you described this Fort . . . beautiful imagery. As far as CC goes, same kind of things I said before, okay? But other than that, truly fascinating. bbiab! LoK
The baava Project 2003-12-01 ch 2,	I've returned, duck and cover! lol ^_^ Are ya ready for some constructive criticism? If you don't want it, go ahead and skip to the next paragraph. I would suggest, that when you have the time, go back and proofread some of your work - the story is very good, but the editing isn't so great and that can make it hard to read. For example, 1. "The villa was cream to match the tree trunks . . ." I actually laughed at that. It almost looks like "vanilla ice cream"! 2. "Inside the house made Kiora want to . . ." The word "inside" can be used as a noun, but this sentence would read better as "The interior of the house . . ." or something like that. 3. At one point you use the name Takaki twice, and then Kataki. Is this the same person and that was only a typo? That's it from me! I hope that all made some sense, and I mean it in NO way to be flames or digs - as I've said before I am enjoying this story. ^_~ Kiora is a wonderful protagonist, and both Kataki and Niam made me smile, so I'm quite interested to see where you're going with this. ja ne, LoK
Densetsu No Yume (too lazy ... 2003-11-26 ch 5,	The atmosphere in this is beautiful... and I'm afraid I've fallen in love with Kataki. Cue starry eyes. Cough. Er, yeah... I wanted to thank you for your reviews - they really helped, now I only need four to post the next chapter - and comment on this. This is a lovely piece of work; hope you'll keep it up! And, uh, to let you know, I'm stalking Kataki. Cough. >.>`

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