they are evil that's what they are. they are cold that's what they are.

good poem. but can i give you a small piece of advice. try and find a synonym for the word numb. i know it's probably the best word to describe the pain but i've noticed it as a pattern in almost all of the poems and i know that it's something you can't help but add but you shoud try and find another way to say it. because you never know, another way could be more powerful than the last.

great poem though. deep. true. amazing.

love always,
fallen angel,
a-light-from-your-darkness