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| EchoesOfReason 2003-11-09 ch 1,   | ...wow... that was good. no. better than good. undescribably good. this was still raw yet well written. i'm glad you took my advice. it's turning out really well. this is...i can't describe it but it's good. it's deep and it says a lot. human phsyci. big role in this. this is what most people would see. i wouldn't i would see someone i could try and help. not all people are like that. but most of this pathetic race are. =( sad to say i know. good job, keep it up. love always, fallen angel, a-light-from-your-darkness |