|Reviews for Fallen Angel|
| Jazzista 6/5/05 . chapter 1
This is one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read.
| Ivriniel 9/9/04 . chapter 1
Wow..you described that perfectly and the repititions sound great as well. I love it!
| Eirien 6/17/04 . chapter 1
An absolutely awesome poem. The wording, the repetitions, the variations in each repetition, above all the message, the depth of raw emotion, the level of insight, the sincerity of penitence, the whole atmosphere, the powerful ending - I could go on like this, it's such a wonderful poem, my praise cannot do it justice. I have to make space for this on my favourites list.
Oh, and I would like to add something to my last review. I've noticed you like C. . I don't know if you're into Tolkien as well, but when you find the time I would recommend to you my LotR-fanfiction (link in my bio). Not only because it's pretty "Lewisesque", but let me say that it is more than a fanfic. Mainly a story of conversion, but I am thinking of one passage in particular where the main character has to face his own past demons of SH - it's actually very much a story about SH as well. (As my shorter story "The Unicorn"). Just thought I'd mention this, I hope you don't mind. Love and blessings, Eirien.
| SJBiernat 6/11/04 . chapter 1
I loved it :) God is great and merciful. Just one thing whenever you said,"My lord, see your fallen angel
Kneel _ at your throne." I just thought that the grammer didn't seem quite right. I thought it should be kneeling.
In Christ, -S
| Caitir 1/9/04 . chapter 1
wow. that poem is beautiful. very impactful with the repeated line form and the way it's structured. very well done! bravo, lovely!
| Lin Winter 1/3/04 . chapter 1
Quite well written.
*adds story to favorites*
| Wasted Postage 11/21/03 . chapter 1
Wow! This was a breathtakingly beautiful piece! I absolutely loved it! You are a VERY talented writer. Excellent excellent job!
| Getuie 11/9/03 . chapter 1
There are no words in which I can describe how much this has touched me... I'm simply without one single word... But I'll give you an idea through action
*clicks on favourite*
| emptyword 11/9/03 . chapter 1
WOW. That is all i can say. Simply amazing.
| Ellerfru 11/9/03 . chapter 1
Angsty... But I like angsty atmosphere... So I guess that's a good thing...