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rightblinkleft 2006-04-24 ch 19,	oh. my. god. oh. my. god. Wub the chappy! Yay! SO HAPPY YOURE FINISHING IT! DUDE HOW DID U DO IT? AH, OOH MEE GOSHHIES WHYD AIDEN FADE AWAY? errgh ben should die like tortured, like DIE DIEe, anyways, THANKS FOR UPDATINGAND UNTIL Next time?soon i hope? LIKE VERY SOON! thanks. thanks. thanks. thanks. thanks.
rightblinkleft 2006-04-23 ch 20,	NU
silver 2006-01-08 ch 14,	dood, i just wanna tell u dat sorry, last time i got kiked off by my sister, so like yeah, i hope u havent finished readin this yet, or like ima lose, and its gonna be like nu! SILVER LOSING?!?! HER REP IS RUINEDD!! HAha jk
Juniper345 2005-03-28 ch 14,	>< u haven't added anymore chapters... =( maybe i shouldn't hit myself. >=o where's the next chap!? =( it left off right there... =( tear
Juniper345 2005-03-28 ch 7,	>_< aiya. I forgot about this story! bows gomen gomen gomen now, im just confused and lost becuase i haven't seen this is so long... =( aiya. i'm going to hit myself. >< i wonder what's the ratio now... i hope A+W is still in the lead... >
Little Precious 2004-07-24 ch 18,	Wow! This story is amazing! I love all your descriptions and how every single character has a flaw =). Both Aiden and Luke are so sweet! Ben freaked me out a little hehe... Do keep on writing (and updating)! I can't wait to see what you've got planned for us next! If you have time, please check out my story. I'd love to hear what you have to say about it! =)
Faythe 2004-04-27 ch 18,	Wow, I really liked this story, I'm sure you've heard that plenty of times already, so no need to embellish on that. I love Winne, her character strongly developed. I like her aura of innocence and her lurking "past life." This is one of the few stories with three dimensional characters. Although I really like your style of righting, there is one thing that I have to mention, I think that you have to develop some of the scenes and make some kind of indication when transitioning from one scene to the next. Anyways, I definitely look forward to reading the rest of the story, so update soon!
Gandella Raye 2004-04-18 ch 18,	aw, poor paris. seemed luke got over it a little fast though...maybe it's just me. oh well, can't wait to read about the dance! and yay! kink isn't gonna die!! whoo hooh!
Lightness 2004-04-15 ch 18,	heeya kid, duude, youve really improved on your writing. your descriptions of the church at the beginning of the chapter were very nicely written. the one thing that was irksome about this chapter was that winnie and luke went to the funeral and then five minutes later, theyre talking about the dance. i just thought that that was odd. especially for luke who didnt really have too much of a reaction at all. paris was his friend but he didnt seem to feel too much. aah well. soo what was that dream about?? will you be going into that somemore in the next chapter?? and im glad that kinks cancer isnt malignant. yaay. uhm.. i think thats all i have to say. soo bye then. keep writing.
Juniper345 2004-04-13 ch 18,	Hey hey! A furnal... and then... a change of mood...? dance...? i must have skipped some paragraphs or something like that... changes mood smirks so... W+A won? or is it still W+L? or you just going to change the whole thingy and say W+K. I don't like Luke. Kink is fine. I am still a W+A fan tho and the ratio is...? (do u still remember?)
RustPoisonedBlade 2004-04-13 ch 18,	Woo! this one is good! Mysterious dreams...funerals...AND NO CANCER FOR KINK! YAY! I'm so happy. i didn't want him to die. He's cool. Well keep it going! Don't stop ,ok?
SIlver 2004-04-13 ch 18,	DEAR OH DEAR GOOF THE MOOF I'M REVIEWIN HAPPY? I'M IMPATIENT OF HOW SLOW YOU UPDATE THE STOROY UR IMPAtIENT OF HOW SLOW I REVIEW!! wERE EQUAL NOW K? CEpt, You told me I won..just at first... look...i haf proof... MoofyisGoofy: FINE YOU WIN TA DA WHOT! GO ME!! ANYWAY GOOFbALL..I JUST WANTED TO SAY... THIS CHAPTA WAS VERY... CLIFF THE HANGER THE WORSE ONE CUZ DO YA KNOW HOW SHORT THIS POOPIN CHAPTER WAS? like... this much.."-" THAT SHORT! MAN OH MAN OH MAN oh and after u finish this story, DUH CONTINUE THE OTHER ONE CUZ I READ IT , WHAT DO U EXPECT ME TO DO AFTER I READ AN UNFINISHED STORY? FINISH IT MYSELF? ARE YOU CARZY? SO DUH U GOTTA FINISH IT GOOFBALL!! I'M GONNA GO NOW! OH AND I DONT GET IT...why Cant that guy tell winnie he has cancer? UPDATE SOON ! ( HOPEFULLY NOW!) HUT HUT HUT -SILVER
violet-eyez 2004-04-13 ch 18,	lol her friend kink is funny update soon
Killer Tofu 2004-04-13 ch 18,	Good chapter. I liked the argument.
FrostedTeardrop 2004-04-12 ch 18,	Yay! that's one more chappie read! claps you know what I ALWAYS will say hehe.. Great chapter! It's true. I always seem a bit hyper when I am reviewing your story don't I? Hehe sorry about that. It can't be helped. I really do feel sorry for Paris, it's so sad how she died. As for Luke he does truly care about winnie doesn't he? Poor him. Poor Winnie too for that matter, all these things are happening to her. Hope it all gets better soon. Well I can't wait for your next update nods excitedly I can't wait to know what happens at the dance! Oh yes, and by the way I HOPE YOU GET BETTER REAL SOON!

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