this is a newer one i suppose? it's good. much better and still it shows the raw emotion. you're getting it now. this is deep and it shows and says a lot. i congratulate you on that. this is a step higher than your other poetry, good job. keep it up, one day it just might help more than you want.

love always,
a-light-from-your-darkness

good poem... i really liked it... plz r&r some of my work if you get the chance... thanks:)