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| Keona Raynalise 2008-09-13 ch 1,   | WOAH Ive herd this story before? i think i saw it on tv or something...u made it creepier though... |
| DiamondTearDrops 2005-09-02 ch 1, | Creepy... very creepy. I kind wish it wasn't so dark and late here in my house... |
| Cooties 2005-03-18 ch 1, | Creepy little girl! |
| Kraven the Hunter 2005-03-01 ch 1, | Ep. |
| spidey waz here 10 min ago 2004-06-24 ch 1, | This is based off of a Twilight Zone episode, isn't it. Except on that one the babysitters turned into barbie-like dolls. Okay, I am just not impressed with the LOOSE base on the episode. |
| ThaIceLady 2004-03-21 ch 1, | What the **?! That was freaking awesome! Awesome story. Definately different. |
| a moo 2004-03-04 ch 1, | OMG, dat was scary/freaky! *shivers and shakes* wow, Alicia is scary! |
| KitiKat 2004-02-26 ch 1, | Good job! I think you got this from Jessica Simpson's debut on the Outer Limits or some other freak show that was like that. Because when I read this, that was all I could think about. But the story is your own and the little details make it different. If you didn't see the show, then you would do good as a writer of shows or something! |
| Minyaithwen 2004-02-15 ch 1, | ...::shiver:: Amazing |
| punk/rockprincess900 2003-12-26 ch 1, | WOAH!! That was som freaky stuff...i'm getting chills just thinking of it *shudders* i can like here her voice high and freaky like *shudders* that was so scary! you're going to give me nightmares...THANK YOU!! no j/k it takes alot to scare me THAT bad, anyway i love this fic and please keep up the awesome work, maybe even make a new one? >:] |