Hi, this story is pretty good. I like the characters, and the plot. D Plz continue to write it. thank you!

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cool cool. love it brilant . Want u to up-date please

very well written. im not sure what to say but i do want to say want a guy like Shane. yum with sensitivity and smartness and kindness, etc

not bad. i really like this story so far. the mood swing was a bit... sudden. and i hope you write more of this story. i think it has potential.

So far I really like your story but I think that the readers should get to know Shane a little better b/c he is still kind of a mystery to me! Why is he suddenly so concerned about Bri if they've been in high school together all that time? One question you might want to think about. Please update soon though...I look forward to the upcoming chapters!

Gad! This is amazing! Crap, I gtg now. I can't give you a long review, but I promise to make it up on your next chapter! This is really awesome!

he'll be a knight in shining armor. lol. this is really good, sorry it's taken me so long but I forgot about it and when I was going through some stories I found it and it caught my attention, again, and I was like, I've read this! so yeah, I still love it and can't wait for you to write more. hmm, wonder what chad had in his hand.
Mel

i havent commented in forever, but this has turned into a really really awesome story. i cant wait to read more.

love ur story! aw so cute! plz keep writing!

This story is freakin awesome, im glad she finally told him the truth, i cant wait to see what happens next. update soon!

aw ... heh i just noticed i found this a loong time ago. yes, some hazy memory back there. but sorry i read a LOT of stories so if some slip my mind, yeah ... i really like thism though. shane's so sweet! omg i wanna guy like him ... but man what is with the name shane? lol such an awesome name. kudos keep it up ) good job. can you do me a favour and check out something i've written ... and give me some constructive criticism? it would be so helpful
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PLEASE UPDATE! my oh my this is a good story! i REALLY like it! please update son!

great story. Update soon. i am very curious to know how Shane will react when he discovers the truth.

omg! i totally love ur story! please plz plz plz write more! i wanna know wot happens! :D
luv Sapphi