Again, the simplicity is enviable. I think that the last stanza is so sublime and perfectly formed that it outshines even the rest of the poem.

And it would be a shame to ruin that dress, wouldn't it? ^^ Very bittersweet indeed, and very well done. You have a way with words, miss Genesis. *nods*
Tenika Dargan

beautifully written, your very talented.

This is a nice one too. I just wanted to say I don't think anyone should have to rate their stuff higher just 'cause there's homosexual content. I know you did it to be polite, but if anyone says people should, I know it would greatly offend me. But that aside, this was a nice poem, as is all your other work I've read. Keep it up! :)

Hello sweetheart *muah*
I can't see "too" much homosexual content, you wouldn't be able to tell anyway ^-^ AW Heather had a crush on a gal *chortles* te he... I find this to be a very lovely poem, different kind of structure as well.
*Jenna*

You are so talented... your writing touches the deepest part of the soul... honest i am telling you this...

me love format sweet & short i like it!