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| Kendra Seer 2004-06-04 ch 1,   | Hmmses, it could use some betaing, the tenses you're using are a bit confusing, you keep switching. . .other than that, it's well written, and the words and phrases you used to express yourself were chock full of good imagery! *sighs* But I wish that you didn't have to write things like this at all. Stupid depression. *hugs* |
| Dark Shadows 2004-01-19 ch 1, | I like this! Dont nesasarily (i can't spell that word... lol) agree, especially about God forsaking this world, but I like it. :) |
| Didi 2003-11-10 ch 1, | Didi: U SHOULD BE A POET U WRITE TO MANY POEMS! by the way me going to have a kid! Guess: *blush* ahem |