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Reviews For: What to Say

atadobsessive5345 2005-12-23 ch 1,	Ooh, this was fun to read. I have a sadistic side, apparently, but I enjoy reading all different types of things. And I guess anything's better than watching Maisy and Blue's Clues and all these other mind numbing children shows. Though Arthur isn't so bad. I really need to get out more. Good job though. I liked Phillip and the face, twere interesting. Well, I should be off for a bit. Hungry-ish and all.
Alexandra I. Gladstone 2005-07-06 ch 1,	This story is great! I really like it. A bit weird becuase he listens to a "face" but thats what makes the story better ^^ I
breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-03-02 ch 1,	Oh, damn. You are GOOD. I remember you saying you were going to get published, right? You must! I'd be the first to buy a copy of your first book and drive you insane for an autograph :) Finally, someone that understands that schizophrenia is not the same as multiple personality disorder. I can't tell you how many people don't know the difference. I recognized from the first line what it was. . .and it's like that too, with the face and all. It's like this obsessive-compulsive type control the illness has on you. You'll do things for reasons that only make sense to you half the time. . .and I must say, that last part- "physical manifestation of another personality" - cool. Uber-cool. Loved it! Wish I could write effective horror. . . -Jessica
pieces 2004-01-19 ch 1,	Very nice. The whole piece has an underlying tone of pure humor that sort of claws at you. Pulling a double take at the end really showed me how much I figured out - even though I spent much of my time reading this chanting "what the hell what the hell" in my mind. Good job. ~Gabby
K. F. Gregory 2003-11-18 ch 1,	I-iee! >.O' EEp. Wonderful. T'is kickarse and WOWZAH! For some reason the face reminded me of Spirited Away, dont ask why. But what was so shibby... O_O EEnh. I wanna write like you. Thazzogod!
Nyaa 2003-11-10 ch 1,	OOh, very cool. I love it. Sometimes the phrasing can get a little confusing, like: "I wanted to cry, and as the face – no, as I tore out her throat with my own teeth and scampered into an alley, I did." It's difficult to understand whether or not he's sitl WANTING to do it, or that he actually did it. Maybe making sentances like that a little clearer... Otherwise, great job! Yay
Hanako 2003-11-10 ch 1,	Lovely...Just lovely. You already know I heart it!
desolus 2003-11-10 ch 1,	O_o Uber creepy. I noticed that in the beginning and the end (the same beginning and end), Philip began just referring 'the voice' to himself, and not as 'the face', perhaps the two personalities manifested into one then? It's sort of disturbing... 'I no longer questioned its orders. If it said I would not break, then I would not break.' - Got to be my favourite set of sentences in the story. It's telling me to tell you this was great... O_o wtf?!

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