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| doubleb19 2004-11-24 ch 1,   | I don't understand this. What did he take? I'm confused... |
| axica 2004-02-19 ch 1, | sometimes, the things you write about disturbs me, especially the REALLY simple what ifs you phrase into stories of lush prose i dont know about before since i never really paid attention, but it seems as if you suddenly got good at writing, and the poems are really solid, nail striking trinklets that are enjoyed and so yah, maybe you read reviews? i dont know i find if you put vague semi-disturbing purple prose into your summary line, people flock to it like moths to a candle flame, and its funny, cuz they eat right up the junk i wrote as a kid, but they back away slowly from the stuff of today and so yah, my point was...ah i hope you read this because your subtle yet blatantly obvious (yes, i know, oxymoron) way of no longer speaking to me is, well, acceptable, but when we talk, it's usually just me rambling anyway cept of course, when i ** you off and you stop talking for a long time anyway, as you may know, love is love all facets of it even the ones you don't go for and i know you're a big kicker for love |