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| Crimsonswordblue 2008-06-08 ch 22, anon. | abuseLiked the story, it was very interesting. Two things though what about Vanessa's friends and also the mandatory UPDATE SOON! crimsonswordblue 8/6/08 |
| vanilla.barcode 2008-05-12 ch 22, | abusecute story, i really enjoyed reading it. Update soon, really looking forward to it. Keep up the good work. |
| Vera 2007-12-27 ch 22, anon. | abuseBeautiful story. I love you. Your writing is very readable and familiar without being overly casual. I like your style. It also helps that your writing doesn't have annoying spelling and grammatical errors like many other fics I've read. Update soon, please! |
| Jynx78 2007-10-17 ch 22, | abusei really like this story. are u ever gona update it again? i hope u do. ill keep an eye out for it. good work ~!!~jYNX~!!~ |
| Nana The Dwarf 2007-07-28 ch 22, anon. | abusePlease update! It's been months...I'm dying here! |
| Anonymous 2007-07-21 ch 22, anon. | abuseGreat story! Can't wait for the next chapter ^^ |
| michelle 2007-02-24 ch 22, anon. | abuseits been four long years! according to fictionpress.. im so glad u updated. : ) it is worth the wait but i'd really love to see more! i love how the story is of vanessa and jenna falling in love, they fell in love with each other as a person and there wasn't a sudden realization like "i'm a lesbian!" or anything.. they just love each other, not the gender. and i think thats really important and something people should understand nowadays.. you fall in love with a person and not their gender. i hope you update soon! i can't wait that long.. there aren't many long developed F/F fics here, and if there are i can't seem to find any worth reading. yours definitely is so keep us all happy and try to find time to update.. i know what you mean that its not a top priority but when you have time and inspiration.. why not, right? i think the two of them are too cute together, its traditonal that the "loner" ends up with the most popular person but you wrote it in a really good way and im sure a lot of us can relate to the fears and doubts that both of the characters have. anyway ive got nothing to say but UPDATE! |
| Nico-artjunkie 2007-02-11 ch 22, | abusethat was simply a great chapter i loved it when Jenna pushed Vanessa into the lake it sounds like something i would do to my girlfriend tee hee anyway i also loved the end dialogue it was so funny i could just see it being played out Vanessa totally deadpan and Jenna all giggly any way i hope u update sooner then last time *Nico* ps this story is actually over 3 years old according to ur publish date |
| Instant Ninja 2007-02-10 ch 22, | abuse...*giggles*...cute! |
| krunkchick 2007-02-09 ch 22, anon. | abuseeh...you got a good story here ive been readin from the beginning of this story...i was thinkin the other...dang i wish she updated...u answered my prays lol...but its a good story its like a chick flick in writing which ainit a bad |
| master of suspence 2007-02-09 ch 22, | abusei like this story it's really good... i love how you developed your characters, and when i was reading chapters 11 and 12 i almost started to cry it was beautifully written and sad all at the sametime. i give you huge props on this story.~Alyse |
| Jamith 2007-02-08 ch 22, | abuseAw...Finally. Keep it up! |
| mythic-lionheart 2007-02-08 ch 22, | abuseyay, you updated. Glad to see. It was a great update. The pushing in the lake was cute :) Keep up the great work! |
| TooLazy2LogIn 2007-02-08 ch 22, anon. | abuseThank u so much 4 updating!! I've been waiting 4 AGES! Brilliant chapter. I hope u plan 2 carry on wit dis. |
| mariposa2 2007-02-08 ch 22, anon. | abuseDude, thank god! You've FINALLY updated. LOVED the new chapter. I hope I don't have to wait as long to read the next one. i had to go back two chapters to remember what last happened.Good stuff! |