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Crimsonswordblue
2008-06-08
ch 22, anon.
abuseLiked the story, it was very interesting. Two things though what about Vanessa's friends and also the mandatory UPDATE SOON!





crimsonswordblue
8/6/08
vanilla.barcode
2008-05-12
ch 22,
abusecute story, i really enjoyed reading it. Update soon, really looking forward to it.
Keep up the good work.
Vera
2007-12-27
ch 22, anon.
abuseBeautiful story. I love you.

Your writing is very readable and familiar without being overly casual. I like your style. It also helps that your writing doesn't have annoying spelling and grammatical errors like many other fics I've read.

Update soon, please!
Jynx78
2007-10-17
ch 22,
abusei really like this story.
are u ever gona update it again?
i hope u do.
ill keep an eye out for it.
good work
~!!~jYNX~!!~
Nana The Dwarf
2007-07-28
ch 22, anon.
abusePlease update! It's been months...I'm dying here!
Anonymous
2007-07-21
ch 22, anon.
abuseGreat story! Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
michelle
2007-02-24
ch 22, anon.
abuseits been four long years! according to fictionpress.. im so glad u updated. : ) it is worth the wait but i'd really love to see more! i love how the story is of vanessa and jenna falling in love, they fell in love with each other as a person and there wasn't a sudden realization like "i'm a lesbian!" or anything.. they just love each other, not the gender. and i think thats really important and something people should understand nowadays.. you fall in love with a person and not their gender.

i hope you update soon! i can't wait that long.. there aren't many long developed F/F fics here, and if there are i can't seem to find any worth reading. yours definitely is so keep us all happy and try to find time to update.. i know what you mean that its not a top priority but when you have time and inspiration.. why not, right?

i think the two of them are too cute together, its traditonal that the "loner" ends up with the most popular person but you wrote it in a really good way and im sure a lot of us can relate to the fears and doubts that both of the characters have.

anyway ive got nothing to say but UPDATE!
Nico-artjunkie
2007-02-11
ch 22,
abusethat was simply a great chapter i loved it when Jenna pushed Vanessa into the lake it sounds like something i would do to my girlfriend tee hee anyway i also loved the end dialogue it was so funny i could just see it being played out Vanessa totally deadpan and Jenna all giggly any way i hope u update sooner then last time
*Nico*
ps this story is actually over 3 years old according to ur publish date
Instant Ninja
2007-02-10
ch 22,
abuse...*giggles*...cute!
krunkchick
2007-02-09
ch 22, anon.
abuseeh...you got a good story here ive been readin from the beginning of this story...i was thinkin the other...dang i wish she updated...u answered my prays lol...but its a good story its like a chick flick in writing which ainit a bad
master of suspence
2007-02-09
ch 22,
abusei like this story it's really good... i love how you developed your characters, and when i was reading chapters 11 and 12 i almost started to cry it was beautifully written and sad all at the sametime. i give you huge props on this story.~Alyse
Jamith
2007-02-08
ch 22,
abuseAw...Finally. Keep it up!
mythic-lionheart
2007-02-08
ch 22,
abuseyay, you updated. Glad to see. It was a great update. The pushing in the lake was cute :)
Keep up the great work!
TooLazy2LogIn
2007-02-08
ch 22, anon.
abuseThank u so much 4 updating!! I've been waiting 4 AGES! Brilliant chapter. I hope u plan 2 carry on wit dis.
mariposa2
2007-02-08
ch 22, anon.
abuseDude, thank god! You've FINALLY updated.

LOVED the new chapter. I hope I don't have to wait as long to read the next one. i had to go back two chapters to remember what last happened.Good stuff!
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