I really love this story so please update soon

aw. over two years again! since you've updated!! argh! (well, you know, 2007, 2009, even if you updated in nov last time. XD and it's currently jan) but wow, XD the writing style slowly changed over the chapters. xD but regradless, it's a good story! only if you updated this more often, though really, it kind of should've been completed. anyways; great story. I hope you would up date soon.

I love your style, it makes me feel familiar with the characters but at the same time keeps the story flowing in a smooth way.

Keep updating! I really enjoyed reading this.

-SL

Amazing, I love how they're slowly progressing. Can't wait for their relationship to progress further! Update soon? Please! Hehe, i love the characters in your story, they're so cute!

Liked the story, it was very interesting. Two things though what about Vanessa's friends and also the mandatory UPDATE SOON!





crimsonswordblue
8/6/08

cute story, i really enjoyed reading it. Update soon, really looking forward to it.
Keep up the good work.

Beautiful story. I love you.

Your writing is very readable and familiar without being overly casual. I like your style. It also helps that your writing doesn't have annoying spelling and grammatical errors like many other fics I've read.

Update soon, please!

i really like this story.
are u ever gona update it again?
i hope u do.
ill keep an eye out for it.
good work
~!!~jYNX~!!~

Please update! It's been months...I'm dying here!

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter ^^

its been four long years! according to fictionpress.. im so glad u updated. : ) it is worth the wait but i'd really love to see more! i love how the story is of vanessa and jenna falling in love, they fell in love with each other as a person and there wasn't a sudden realization like "i'm a lesbian!" or anything.. they just love each other, not the gender. and i think thats really important and something people should understand nowadays.. you fall in love with a person and not their gender.

i hope you update soon! i can't wait that long.. there aren't many long developed F/F fics here, and if there are i can't seem to find any worth reading. yours definitely is so keep us all happy and try to find time to update.. i know what you mean that its not a top priority but when you have time and inspiration.. why not, right?

i think the two of them are too cute together, its traditonal that the "loner" ends up with the most popular person but you wrote it in a really good way and im sure a lot of us can relate to the fears and doubts that both of the characters have.

anyway ive got nothing to say but UPDATE!

that was simply a great chapter i loved it when Jenna pushed Vanessa into the lake it sounds like something i would do to my girlfriend tee hee anyway i also loved the end dialogue it was so funny i could just see it being played out Vanessa totally deadpan and Jenna all giggly any way i hope u update sooner then last time
*Nico*
ps this story is actually over 3 years old according to ur publish date

...*giggles*...cute!

eh...you got a good story here ive been readin from the beginning of this story...i was thinkin the other...dang i wish she updated...u answered my prays lol...but its a good story its like a chick flick in writing which ainit a bad

i like this story it's really good... i love how you developed your characters, and when i was reading chapters 11 and 12 i almost started to cry it was beautifully written and sad all at the sametime. i give you huge props on this story.~Alyse