Good free verse. I love the twist in the end, kinda sad though. Good work.

i like how it repeats itself... twilight zone-ish. i found it confusing as to what the conection between her and the other person was, it wasnt really specified... perhaps you could make this more clear. i found it cool when they looked up and they saw the other person. i just think it needs alittle more specification with the bond between them to pull the peom together better.