hey...thats pretty good..this is the first one of your poems I've read...but I'm sure that if their anything lyk this...=) your writing is powerful, keep it up!!

great poem. i too am a hopeful romantic but i mean, what's the point i'm going to end alone anyway but that's another story. can you please review some of my work?

Nice work. A piece made by a true hopeful romantic. :)

Keep doing these stuff and your curse may just be broken very soon. ^_-


-hopeless romantic

Simple, yet it says a lot. Interesting irregular rhyme scheme. Like the style of it, very nice.

Izzy J.