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| Haley 2003-11-24 ch 1,  | Excellent use of extended metaphore. . .it speaks to the heart. Make sure that the format matches your intention for the flow (did you do that?) |
| Laura Ashly 2003-11-23 ch 1, | honestly... i think this poem is really really good. it's different than a lot of the poems that i've read of yours. it throws out all sorts of emotions you don't know whether to feel happy or almost sad. love always has two sides to it, the good, and the bad. most poems are about the good, but you're kinda captured both sides. good poem case! |
| Starinababy 2003-11-16 ch 1,  | why doesnt any one review great work as yours? oh well... I DO! hehehe... so hard to resist! lolz... okay well i gotta go read more of ur works... |