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| Crazy-Word-Painter 2004-09-01 ch 3,  | AH NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS! *looks cute* pleasies? |
| Crazy-Word-Painter 2004-09-01 ch 2, | I'm a bit confused, but I suppose all will be explained later. I like the way you compare them to cats a lot... let me guess, you're a cat person? Lol :p Anyway, I'm waiting for romance! ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE! And the guy... the main character... does he have a name? I don't remember hearing it... good chapter! |
| Crazy-Word-Painter 2004-09-01 ch 1, | Oh, you're good. I loved the description of her, it actually made me shiver. Good work, good work, good work! Oh, and thanks for the reivew! Lol, our styles are so different. Yours is so dark and deep and mine is happy and about talking bunnies... woah... anyway, thanks and again GOOD STORY! |
| MF 2003-11-21 ch 2, | Greetings. I rather like this story. Your writing is similar to your RPing style...It's like...col. Anyway, I'm on a caffiene high now, so I won't be able to leave a very constructive review...keep writing. MF |
| Halogen Azley 2003-11-12 ch 1,  | The description and the style of writng is nice! Keep it up! |
| {insert witty name here} 2003-11-10 ch 1, | Boo. Me like the description muchily. That is my constructive review. *tips hat* Au revoir. |
| Cherry Sprite 2003-11-10 ch 1, | this is a good story so far. Keep up the good work! |
| JackDavis 2003-11-10 ch 1, | Wow! This is great, I love the use of oxymoron and paradox in this piece! I can't wait to read the rest of this. I think you made a typo: Ebon eyes, shouldn't that be ebony eyes? |
| Kell Hound 2003-11-10 ch 1, | great job keep writing. |