Very nice. I like how you can make such a short story--if you can call it a story--so relevant. Keep writing.

That's awesome... REVOLUTION!

Good thing. I like this a lot. REVOLUTIONS! lol. thats my favorite line. So can you read and review some of my stuff!!? Thanks!

Revolution never starts off loud, it starts very quietly and leads up to a big bang as more people get outraged. I like the way this is written, how it describes the spirit of a real revolution. Very nice. Rock on!