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| Virulent Atman 2004-04-25 ch 1, | ::nod:: |
| lronMaiden 2004-01-14 ch 1, | hehe, i always daydream when i do the dishes and look out the window. this poem captures exactly that |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-12 ch 1, | I like this, but winter SUCKS, lol. Winter is bad! You have good word choice! |
| Linnet 2004-01-10 ch 1, | Wow.. sounds like you were in a pensieve mood... if *I* looked out my kitchen window, I'd be thinking of how we need to get rid of our pool and get a decent garden... |
| Crelian2202 2003-12-29 ch 1, | Nice, I am not a fan of winter but it made me want to go outside and do something. |
| Siberia1 2003-11-29 ch 1, | *teeth chattering* Brr, I can almost feel the chill in this poem. Good job. |
| RainShadow2005 2003-11-28 ch 1, | I think haikus are beautiful. This one had an imagery that seems to cause a small chill in the reader. It's as if I can feel the cold wind from the poem reach out from the screen with bone-chilling fingers and slip down the back of my shirt, a little like snow when I used to fall off my sled as a child. Very short poem but effective. |
| Mista Mugs 2003-11-24 ch 1, | Nice, very nice. I bloody well love imagism poetry. I got a quite sharp image in my mind of this. Almost could feel that cold wind. Cheers. |
| Smemily 2003-11-22 ch 1, | Short but sweet. I like it. |
| Tears of the Wind 2003-11-20 ch 1, | hm. I know what you mean. Winter time is my birthday and it always occupies my life more than any other time of the year. |