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Reviews For: Morning Dishes

Virulent Atman
2004-04-25
ch 1,
::nod::
lronMaiden
2004-01-14
ch 1,
hehe, i always daydream when i do the dishes and look out the window. this poem captures exactly that
MR.SEAN
2004-01-12
ch 1,
I like this, but winter SUCKS, lol. Winter is bad! You have good word choice!
Linnet
2004-01-10
ch 1,
Wow.. sounds like you were in a pensieve mood... if *I* looked out my kitchen window, I'd be thinking of how we need to get rid of our pool and get a decent garden...
Crelian2202
2003-12-29
ch 1,
Nice, I am not a fan of winter but it made me want to go outside and do something.
Siberia1
2003-11-29
ch 1,
*teeth chattering* Brr, I can almost feel the chill in this poem. Good job.
RainShadow2005
2003-11-28
ch 1,
I think haikus are beautiful. This one had an imagery that seems to cause a small chill in the reader. It's as if I can feel the cold wind from the poem reach out from the screen with bone-chilling fingers and slip down the back of my shirt, a little like snow when I used to fall off my sled as a child. Very short poem but effective.
Mista Mugs
2003-11-24
ch 1,
Nice, very nice. I bloody well love imagism poetry. I got a quite sharp image in my mind of this. Almost could feel that cold wind.

Cheers.
Smemily
2003-11-22
ch 1,
Short but sweet. I like it.
Tears of the Wind
2003-11-20
ch 1,
hm. I know what you mean. Winter time is my birthday and it always occupies my life more than any other time of the year.
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